Can you tell a story in 54 words #6

Can you tell a story in 54 words using the following words in it somewhere:

• GERBIL
• WONDERLAND
• ZIP
• AFTERSHAVE
• BANSHEE

Tom’s aftershave turned her reverie back to reality. Here she was standing beside her first love on a date 30 years later when he left her at the train station crying like a banshee as the train zipped away. She wanted to burrow in the ground like a gerbil. Life hadn’t been a Wonderland.